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Retribution
« on: July 21, 2016, 02:25:17 am »










It all started in California. It was a hot day around 4:00 P.M. I was looking for some tools in my dad's garage to fix my car. In the corner I saw something covered with a old gray rag. I was wondering what was in there so I decided to check it out. After taking off the rag I discovered a old covered in dust freeway. Forgetting about my car I took it outside and cleaned it.



I called some buddy's over to my house to check it out. Like myself, they thought it was pretty sick. We went inside the house for a while and inside I remembered of an old jacket I kept on seeing in my fathers room. While my friends were talking about the bike I went to search for the jacket. After 5 minutes of searching I found it. It was a old gray jacket with a Skull and a sign saying "Retribution" in big Black letters on the back.




Next to the jacket I found a couple newspapers. I went back to my friends and showed them what I discovered. In the newspapers there was a lot of story's about Retribution. The newspapers were around 10 year old. Than I thought that this would be a way i can redeem myself. My father was never proud of me. I wanted to make him proud of me by remaking Retribution. I persuaded my friends into buying motorcycles. It was a hell of adventure for us in the first couple of days....






When our group was on a ride at a beach in a summer day a way larger group of people on bikes drove up to us. One of them a fat man around 50 came up to my friend Jordan who was currently in front of us all and said "You wont be a trouble for us again, huh?". Jordan just shook his head and answered "What are you talking about?". The old man got mad and started screaming "Ten years ago you almost send us to jail! But this time we are not gonna make the same mistake about letting you stay." he pushed Jordan putting something into his jacket, but none of us realized it until later on. We attacked them and smashes the faces of few of them but even then, they left us being kind of happy.



Couple days later when me and Toledo were at a party when we heard a loud noise. Then screams everywhere and SWAT running in saying "Get on the ground NOW NOW!".





Everybody started running. Me and Toledo got on our bikes and drove to Jordan's house because it was the closest. While talking about what happened at the party out of Jordan's jacket fell out a plastic bag with diamonds, when Jordan accidentally sat on it. We all remained quiet. I picked up the bag slowly looking at it. "Holy ****..... Those are the diamonds from the Museum that was robbed a week ago, I saw the picture of them on the news" said Toledo. Jordan said "Those bikess must of put it in my jacket when he the big one pushed me, they want to set us up."


 "I even if we tell them we did not steal them it wont help. You know the system" Toledo said putting the diamonds in his pocket. "We need to leave this town as soon as we can, let's get the other guys" I said. We all knew each other for years, each of us would take a bullet to save us. So they went on with Toledo, Jordan and myself. I left a letter to my dad before we left.

"Dear Dad,

I tried to make your proud of me but I failed once again. Me and my friends started the Retribution so you may think I am good at something, but unfortunately we got into a lot of trouble lately. I am leaving the town. I wont tell you where I'm going. I wont be back for a while. I just want you to know I love you and that i tried.

After I wrote the letter we got out on our way to our bikes when dozens of police cars surrounded us with their sirens on and cops aiming their guns at us. We knew we **** up.
We were on our way Riding to Hell.






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Kendrick Cole






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« Last Edit: July 22, 2016, 12:02:12 am by bojicha »

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Re: Retribution
« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2016, 02:35:31 am »
Good luck.
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Re: Retribution
« Reply #2 on: July 21, 2016, 02:44:55 am »
Application has been updated. Sorry, I accidentally pressed post before I finished it -_-

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Re: Retribution
« Reply #3 on: July 21, 2016, 02:53:20 am »
 :o :o :o :o :o Got my eyes on you!!
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Re: Retribution
« Reply #4 on: July 21, 2016, 06:59:45 am »
Looks brilliant! Although the screenshots are from an absolutely God awful game hahaha, hope to see some roleplay soon!
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Re: Retribution
« Reply #5 on: July 21, 2016, 01:18:33 pm »
Very well written, neatly designed and information was easily put across. I await roleplay screens, a plethora of them. :D

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Re: Retribution
« Reply #6 on: July 21, 2016, 01:33:28 pm »
Very nice! Make this good

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Re: Retribution
« Reply #7 on: July 21, 2016, 03:02:14 pm »
Killbane, the game was bad but the material it provides is amazing :D

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Re: Retribution
« Reply #8 on: July 21, 2016, 03:07:52 pm »
Killbane, the game was bad but the material it provides is amazing :D

True, very impressed with the topic as a whole - brilliant use of initiative to use the material from the game! :D

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Re: Retribution
« Reply #9 on: July 21, 2016, 10:18:47 pm »

Pics of small RP. Nothing big.
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Re: Retribution
« Reply #10 on: July 21, 2016, 11:54:57 pm »

Recruiting :D
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Re: Retribution
« Reply #11 on: July 22, 2016, 12:04:11 am »
Looks dope! Goodluck, take it far mate. Looking forward to rp with you.

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Re: Retribution
« Reply #12 on: July 22, 2016, 05:31:31 am »


*Watching Conway fighting Pablo, as Conway is now the new champion*

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Re: Retribution
« Reply #13 on: July 22, 2016, 08:18:16 am »
Champion, for real ?
I let him go in an unofficial fight since I was role playing character development. He is not a champ unless he gets the title officially.
But it was nice to Rp with some of you.

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Re: Retribution
« Reply #14 on: July 22, 2016, 02:47:40 pm »
Ofcourse you did, in your dreams -_-
If I remember correctly, you are the guy that took me only 10 HP only and started crying he had some heart condition lol.
« Last Edit: July 22, 2016, 02:51:45 pm by bojicha »

 

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